Almost Trashed

What makes a good blog entry? Or good writing? If it's just an expression, why do we carefully edit and re-write initial impressions? Most of this blog is, in a way, random or focused thought, instantly conveyed in the first sentence I can form around the basic idea. But, there are times when I type something out and don't publish it. Perhaps waiting to see if I can express myself better. Usually, those are the posts that never get published.
I wrote this a few months ago and nearly deleted it. It makes perfect sense to me though. I don't understand or know grace. I live and experience it.

I've been free for too long
To know what freedom costs
No price to pay
No more debt and shame

To hear someone say
That it's okay to be frayed
To throw it all away
And start over again

What freedom is this?
Living at someone else's cost.